Sunday, August 30, 2015

Murder on the North Shore (rough draft)

The wind whistled.  The day was full of clouds with a hint of rain.  Seth Tryton stood at the top of Palisade Head, staring at whitecaps that splashed across Lake Superior. He walked with trepidation to the three-foot tall rock wall lining the edge of the cliff and looked over the edge to the rocks and water a hundred-seventy feet below.  He shivered.  The Fedora blew from his head, rolling across the rock and grass before it stopped at the feet of a man sharing the view.
“Gotchya,” said the stranger.  He plucked it from the ground and stepped toward Tryton, holding the hat in an outstretched hand.
“Thought I lost it for a moment, there,” Tryton said, planting the hat back on his head.  “Thanks for catching it.”
The stranger was a little younger than Tryton, probably fifty something, and short: probably no taller than five-foot seven, a round face with dark, brown hair of medium length, a friendly smile, and a hell of a strong grip.
They decided to sit and visit on two boulders set back from the wall.  Seth confessed that he was traveling alone with no spouse, children or grandchildren accompanying him.  He was there for a holiday, he said, just to relax and enjoy the North Shore of Minnesota.
“I actually live near here,” said Peter Karonen.  “Up near Finland.”  Tryton cocked his head a little.  Karonen acknowledged the questioning look and said, “It’s a little town inland, not far from Silver Bay.  I come up here often just to look out across the lake.  It always makes me feel alive when I stand—or sit, with the breeze in my face, a memory in my heart… and drink in that.”  He nodded toward the lake.  “Sometimes it’s rough like today, and other times it’s as smooth as a whore’s ass.  It’s like no other place in Minnesota.”
Tryton chuckled at the reference to the whore’s ass.  He’d known a few in his day—long ago.  But he still cherished the memories. They talked on for a while, getting more acquainted, enjoying each other’s company.  Karonen stood, signaling an end to the conversation and began the short walk to his nearby truck.  Tryton followed and opened his car door.
“Hey, if you want to follow me to my place I’ll give you a beer, whiskey, or whatever and I can tell you about some great, out of the way places to visit around here.”
Tryton only hesitated a moment before accepting the offer. He followed Karonen’s truck to Finland.


Gerald Hodges was drying the dishes when his phone rang.  He picked up on the third ring.
“Gerry?” the voice asked.  Hodges recognized Earl Mancoat’s voice.
“I’m sorry,” he lied.  “There is no Gerald here.  You have the wrong number.”  He started to hang up.
“No, Gerry, don’t hang up.  It’s Earl, Earl Mancoat.  We gotta talk. Seth Tryton’s missing, maybe killed, maybe murdered.”
The words froze in Hodge’s brain.  Seth, dead?  He brought the phone nearer his better ear.

“I’m listening,” he said.

Saturday, August 29, 2015

New stories coming.

I've begun outlining three new stories. The first is a Gerald Hodges novel that will have him investigating the disappearance and possible murder of one of his friends.  It will take place on the North Shore.

The next will be about two, fifty year old friends who begin lamenting the emptiness of their lives and grouse, "Is that all there is", before deciding to set off across the country and the world to do "what they really want to do".

The third novel will be based on a triple murder that took place in Austin, MN in 1937.


Tune in for excerpts.  I will also be posting some short  stories.

Sunday, August 9, 2015

Formatting and cover issues are all resolved

Both book formats are available at Amazon.com.  The paperback version is good to go.  Formatting and book cover issues are in the past.

Friday, July 31, 2015

Section of short story submitted for publication- The Wallflower Reunion

He watched in the mirror as the blood followed a slow, convoluted path and dribbled down his neck.  The hand holding the razor froze, as a paralyzing thought pounded his brain.  What if she doesn’t recognize me?  Frightened and horrified, he stood in his underwear and stared into the mirror.  
Moments later, his attention returned to the razor cut dribbling a growing amount of blood onto the soft folds of skin that coursed across his neck.  Rick Steps snatched a wad of toilet paper and dabbed at the blood.  Too much blood.  He collected another wad and pressed it hard against the stinging razor nick, holding it until he thought it would stop bleeding. 
He left a torn sheet of toilet paper stuck to the slit in his neck, knowing from experience it would stanch the flow of blood and allow him to continue shaving.  Negative, troubling thoughts continued to plague him until he finished up, removed the toilet paper, and made sure the wound would not bleed anymore.
The high school reunion dinner would begin at six tonight at the local country club.  Everyone would have to walk up the grand entrance stairs to the upper level where the welcoming committee would be waiting.  Chrissie Manuess would be among them.  

The room was not warm, but a cold sweat broke out, sending rivulets of perspiration running into his eyes  He grabbed a hand towel and pressed it against his face and wiped the sweat from his eyes.

Monday, July 20, 2015

Paperback copies

Paperback copies will be available on Amazon.com by July 24, 2015.  I have been proofing copies along with some other people, including friends and family.  It's amazing to think there could still be typos, spelling, and syntax issues, but, hey, such is the process of producing a book.  Thanks to all the people, especially my wife, Cindy, who have gone over parts of the proof and helped improve the final product.  I greatly appreciate all the effort you put in.

Monday, July 13, 2015

Paperback jacket

It's done!!  The cover is ready and accepted by the publishing house.  I ordered a proof to do a final inspection-should be here Friday.  If everything looks good, I'll give the final go ahead for printing.

Thursday, July 9, 2015

Cover for Kindle

The cover for the Kindle copy of 'Brothers' is now the way I want it.  One cover down and one to go. I hope to have the glitches ironed out on the paperback cover within to weeks.