Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Hi,
It's Halloween and as soon as we turned on the lights we had little, scary bodies showing up at our door.  There's a little break now, so I decided to post the rest of the first chapter of my new story (still untitled).  Here it is:



                                                    CHAPTER 1

Beth retreated and circled as the six-foot-two, slimy looking stooge stalked her.  When he lunged and grabbed for her neck she deftly sidestepped, hammer fist punched him on the left side of his neck, and delivered a knee to his throat.   Fortunately for the slime-ball, however, he was wearing protective gear.  He was unhurt. 
The audience of a dozen women (young and old) burst into applause and then showered Beth with congratulations.  The would be mugger waited till the women parted from Beth, and then approached to shake her hand.  Beth eschewed the hand shake and threw a heartfelt hug into his burly figure.  The instructor smiled widely as he embraced her. 
"I never thought I would get to this point.  You've taught me so much," Beth gushed.
"I've never had a student pick up the attitude and techniques as fast as you have," Damien, the Krav Maga instructor responded.  "I hope you're going to stick with it," he added with some concern to his voice.
"No need to worry about that.  You"re going to be seeing me for a while."
A relieved grin appeared on Damien's face as he hugged her again.  "Great!  Then I'll see you on Thursday.  There's a lot more to learn, and only part of it is physical.  Krav Maga demands a mental toughness and understanding that when you're attacked in the real world it has absolutely nothing to do with practicing kicks on a heavy bag."
"I know, Damien.  I promise I'll be a good pupil". 
Beth had found out about Krav Maga a month following the death of her years long tormentor, Adrian Pope.  Her near death experience and feelings of helplessness when physically confronted by him had convinced her to attend some sort of self-defense training.  She had vowed that she would never again let another human being gain dominion over her.
The training took place in the basement area of a downtown Rochester hotel.  She had read an article in the local newspaper describing it as an Israeli form of martial arts.  It had been advertised as the only style of martial arts that applied to real world situations.  Her first class instructor had begun by lining all the participants at the front of the room and having them take a bow.  Then they had gone right into jumping jacks alternated with push-ups and some basic blocks with a partner.  Abs and stretching work followed.  The tone of the warm-up had been tough with the instructor yelling and appearing to want to break her down.  She had felt intimidated, but didn't leave.
Each person had then been assigned a partner and practiced palm-heal hits into pads.  Her adrenalin had flowed fiercely.  Attack scenarios came next.  First they watched the instructor and her assistant walk through frontal choking situations and how to escape.  Partners then practiced with each other.  The instructor and assistant came to each pair and offered criticism and feedback. 
The class ended with a repeat of the beginning warm-ups.  At the very end of the class, the instructor stressed that Krav Maga was a martial arts technique that involved Karate, Boxing, Muay Thai, Kickboxing, Jujitsu, Wrestling, and Grappling.  He repeated that the focus would be on real-life situations and extremely efficient and brutal counter-attacks. 
He delved into the history of the techniques.  Beth learned that it sprang from street-fighting skills developed by Imi Lichtenfeld, a Hungarian-Israeli martial artist.  Lichtenfeld had used his training as a boxer and wrestler as a means of defending the Jewish quarter against fascist groups in Bratislava during the mid-to-late 1930s.  In the late 1940s he began to provide lessons on combat training for what became known as the IDF (Israeli Defense Forces).  The IDF went on to design the Krav Maga system.  The philosophy of the system emphasized threat neutralization, simultaneous defensive and offensive maneuvers, and aggression.
Beth had felt a surge of energy as she accomplished everything demanded of her the first day, and in every training session thereafter.  She developed a strong sense of confidence in her physical and mental skills to the point where Beth found herself reveling and even thriving in this new-found environment. 
After showering and dressing, Beth took the stairs leading from the basement of the Mahler Hotel, passed through the fancy lobby, and burst into a fast walk.   She  emerged from the building and into darkness interrupted only by city lights.  she was filled with an intense feeling of confidence and vigor.   She remembered that her cell phone had been on vibrate and switched it back on.  Within seconds it rang.  She answered as she continued to swiftly walk the streets on her way to the public parking ramp. 
"Hello."  Silence.  She repeated the greeting.  Met by silence again, she was about to chalk it up as a wrong number, when the voice on the line made her stop. 
"I have someone who wants to talk to you," the familiar voice calmly stated.  Mark's voice came on the line.
"Beth, they have me!"  A jumbled sound that reminded her of an over-amped microphone being jostled around replaced Mark's voice. 
And then the familiar, initial voice came back on the line and said her name, "Beth, you have something that we want." 
She knew this time might come.  She just didn't know it would happen this soon.  Beth didn't know what to say so she remained silent for a few seconds.
"Are you still on the line?" Cassandra asked.
"Yes," she managed to say while her voice cracked.
"Good.  You never know when you're going to lose cell phone connections now  days.  We need to meet and sort this whole thing out," Cassandra said amiably.  She continued.  "We'll contact you tomorrow when you're feeling a little less tired.  We understand that you've had a difficult  evening of punching, kicking, and yelling.  Get a good nights rest.  You'll need it." 
The line went dead.  Beth slowly lowered the phone to her side while blankly staring straight ahead.   She stood motionless for several seconds.   Mark had said "they" have me.   Cassandra had said, you have something "we" want.  Obviously, Mr. John was with her.  Beth knew what they wanted.  Money! 
Unconsciously, she began walking again, slowly at first, then rapidly until she was almost running.   She reached her tan-colored Ford Focus within five minutes.  Grasping her keys from her purse, she fumbled and dropped them.  Nervously, and with a sense of desperation, she grabbed for the keys and pushed them under the car. 
"Chill," she told herself as she stood without picking the keys up.  Thirty seconds passed before her breathing had returned to normal.  Her eyes scanned the parking-ramp before getting on her hands and knees to retrieve her car keys.  Standing again, she turned the key in the lock and opened the door.  Beth settled comfortably onto the cloth seat and started the engine.  She began mentally preparing herself for the fight she knew would come.



Thursday, October 25, 2012

Hi.  I've been pretty busy for a few months and haven't posted anything since August.  My wife and I just returned from a two week trip to Italy.  We visited, in order, Venice, Florence, Rome, and Sorrento.  All were beautiful, but Sorrento stood out to us for the shear beauty of the area right on the coast of the Mediterranean.  Capri was a short hop away on a ferry, which we took, and the ruins of Pompeii were to the north.  Both were, literally, breathtaking, but for different reasons.

But, enough of that, now for the important stuff.  I have started work on a sequel to "Trust Me Now"  which picks up where the first novel left off.  Cassandra and Mr. John are alive and well, holed up in a safe spot and eager to get their money back from Beth, plus a little revenge.   Here is a short sample:


PROLOGUE


Mark awoke, his body stuck in a fetal position. He tried stretching to his full six-foot length, but was stopped by a hard, extended surface on both ends.   He moved his feet behind and arms to the front.  The same type of hard surface abruptly stopped his limbs.  Violently, his body was suddenly launched vertically, and his head crashed into the top of the enclosure he realized he was trapped in.  
He was moving, or rather, the container he was in, was moving.   While continuing to be bounced around he was slowly becoming aware of what had happened to him earlier in the evening.
While emptying his trash into an outside bin someone had approached him from behind and covered his nose and mouth with a rag soaked in something; chloroform he guessed.  Blackness had enveloped him, until waking in the moving container he currently occupied. 
Another brutal bump sent him to the top of his container again, banging him down with a force that caught his right hand twisted beneath his hips.  Pain now wracked through his hand and extended into his forearm.  Whatever he was riding in was not rolling over a smooth surface.  Mark was continually bouncing around with an occasional huge jolt sending him flying into the roof.  Roof!  As his mind continued to clear, he began to understand that he was in the trunk of a car moving over rough roads. 
Questions tumbled from his mind, bewildering him with answers that made no sense.  Who did this?  Why?  Where is he or she taking me?  Is it one person, two, three?  He almost dreaded the answers.



                                                    CHAPTER 1

Beth retreated and circled as the six-foot-two, slimy looking stooge stalked her.  When he lunged and grabbed for her neck she deftly sidestepped, hammer fist punched him on the left side of his neck, and delivered a knee to his throat.   Fortunately for the slime-ball, however, he was wearing protective gear.  He was unhurt. 
The audience of a dozen women (young and old) burst into applause and then showered Beth with congratulations.  The would be mugger waited till the women parted from Beth, and then approached to shake her hand.  Beth eschewed the handshake and threw a heartfelt hug into his burly figure.  The instructor smiled widely as he embraced her. 
"I never thought I would get to this point.  You've taught me so much," Beth gushed.
"I've never had a student pick up the attitude and techniques as fast as you have," Damien, the Krav Maga instructor responded.  "I hope you're going to stick with it," he added with some concern to his voice.
"No need to worry about that.  Youre going to be seeing me for a while."
A relieved grin appeared on Damien's face as he hugged her again.  "Great!  Then I'll see you on Thursday.  There's a lot more to learn, and only part of it is physical.  Krav Maga demands a mental toughness and understanding that when you're attacked in the real world it has absolutely nothing to do with practicing kicks on a heavy bag."
"I know, Damien.  I promise I'll be a good pupil". 
Beth had found out about Krav Maga a month following the death of her years long tormentor, Adrian Pope.  Her near death experience and feelings of helplessness when physically confronted by him had convinced her to attend some sort of self-defense training.  She had vowed that she would never again let another human being gain dominion over her.
The training took place in the basement area of a downtown Rochester hotel.  She had read an article in the local newspaper describing it as an Israeli form of martial arts.  It had been advertised as the only style of martial arts that applied to real world situations.  Her first class instructor had begun by lining all the participants at the front of the room and having them take a bow.  Then they had gone right into jumping jacks alternated with push-ups and some basic blocks with a partner.  Abs and stretching work followed.  The tone of the warm-up had been tough with the instructor yelling and appearing to want to break her down.  She had felt intimidated, but didn't leave.