Friday, April 24, 2015

In pursuit

The late afternoon sun was low in the western sky, barely hanging above the treetops.  Jack and Gabe paddled along at a far, less hectic pace than they had earlier in the afternoon, and a burgeoning chill was taking hold in the air.  Smoke drifted lazily from the eastern shore a half mile from the brothers.
Gabe corrected their course a little to the right.  “I’ll wager, we’ll find Kellan along with our two friends from the saloon waiting for us there, or at the least a note,” he said.  A slight hope resided in his mind that there might be a peaceful end to whatever this was that was happening to them.
“Gabe, I’m a little afraid,” Jack confessed.
“I am too, Jack.”  
Jack was surprised.  Whatever he knew of Gabe, he thought he would never admit to being frightened.  After all, Gabe had volunteered for three tours in Vietnam.  You don’t do that if you’re afraid, a little crazy maybe, but not afraid.

As the seventeen foot Jensen glided closer to the campsite, Jack could see a beached aluminum canoe and discerned movement away from the water.  Pulling within a hundred yards, he could see a large person standing by the logs rimming the fire grate.  Another body was roaming behind the first.  He could see the second body stop, bend over by a tree and then jerk a third person to his feet, Kellan.  

Friday, April 17, 2015

Editing and jacket cover plans

Although I am still involved in rewriting and probably will continue for awhile, I am almost ready to engage an editor to fix what needs fixing, and have talked to the lady who has great experience with book jackets.  I'm thinking of a silhouetted or darkened picture of three men with the Gabe character in the middle, wearing a wide brimmed hat, flanked by two other dudes.  My older brother will be in town in a couple of weeks so I'll stage a photo-op with him, myself and my sister's friend, Steve.  In front of that photo, which will basically be an outline of the three main characters, I'd like a transparent, almost ghostlike photo superimposed over the picture of the three older brothers of  them when they were young lads.  Again, faces obscured.

Still waiting to hear from the publisher.  A friend of mine told me that it generally takes two months for publishers to get back to you.  Two months will be up in about three weeks so, still hoping for a response.

I'll get going this weekend and send out another Query letter with synopsis, prologue, and first chapter to a publisher that Writer's Digest listed.

I think J.K. Rowling was rejected something like 27 times before her first Harry Potter novel was accepted for publication.  At that rate, I've got to send out a lot more Query letters with samples.

Better get moving!!